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Belle and Ariel

Belle and Ariel

Once upon a time, at a beautiful beach where the waves kissed the shore and the sun shone brightly, Princess Belle and Mermaid Ariel were about to reunite after many years. They had been best friends in their school days, and fate had brought them together again for a special day.

Belle and Ariel sat down on the sand and enjoyed some ice cream. Belle asked, “What is it like being a mermaid?” Ariel replied, “It’s kinda boring, all you do is swim underwater.” Belle giggled and said, “That’s cool, I want to be a mermaid.” Then Ariel asked Belle, “What is it like being a princess?” Belle told Ariel, “It’s really cool being a princess, but being a mermaid sounds much more fun.”

After finishing their ice cream, they went for a swim. Belle shivered at the cold water, but Ariel, unaffected by the temperature, transformed into a mermaid. Belle was amazed. Ariel invited Belle to hop on her back, and they swam together. “That was so cool,” said Belle, and Ariel agreed, “Yeah, it is cool.”

As the sun began to set, they packed up their things, said goodbye, and went home to sleep. They realised how special their friendship was, even after all these years. The day reminded them of the joy and magic in both their worlds, and as they headed home with smiles on their faces, they knew this was just one of many adventures they would share.

Suspenseful Beginning

In writing this week, we have been learning how to create a suspenseful beginning through imagery and dialogue.  Suspenseful means

creating a feeling of excitement and uncertainty about what will happen next.

using descriptive language to create vivid mental pictures or sensory expeniennces what you see,smell,hear,tase and feel.

 

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